Step 1.We walked down the paddock to cut two sticks out of the a long wood stick.We used a pruning saw for it.
Step 2. We (Indy and I) ran back up and made our rakau sticks pretty.
Step 3.And we made them pretty with robbing the rakau sticks over the concrete to make them smooth.
Step 4.After all we trained to play the rakau instrument in Maori stile.We want to play them for Matariki with the song"E Papa Waiari".
Your use of English is accurate and you are adding descriptive words. Great recall of the event using a step by step approach. This style of writing is more usual for recording technical or science information. There are some homophones in your writing that are difficult to spot when self correcting. The styley picture gives greater meaning.
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